Anything Goes
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I like the style of this and the rhyming. I don't know the form, but I can say that there were no stumbles in it for me at all.

At times the rhymes were stretched, but the tone of the piece made it a treat instead of any kind of issue for me.

I know this isn't much, but I just wanted to say that from the perspective of a person that doesn't know a lot about poetry in technical terms liked this and is trying to explain why (badly) :p

Thanks for sharing.
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Anything Goes - by penguin - 11-19-2012, 04:52 AM
RE: Anything Goes - by Wildcard - 11-20-2012, 01:17 PM
RE: Anything Goes - by penguin - 11-21-2012, 06:27 PM
RE: Anything Goes - by billy - 11-22-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: Anything Goes - by penguin - 11-22-2012, 11:43 PM
RE: Anything Goes - by billy - 11-23-2012, 10:59 AM



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