11-20-2012, 01:17 PM
I like the style of this and the rhyming. I don't know the form, but I can say that there were no stumbles in it for me at all.
At times the rhymes were stretched, but the tone of the piece made it a treat instead of any kind of issue for me.
I know this isn't much, but I just wanted to say that from the perspective of a person that doesn't know a lot about poetry in technical terms liked this and is trying to explain why (badly) :p
Thanks for sharing.
At times the rhymes were stretched, but the tone of the piece made it a treat instead of any kind of issue for me.
I know this isn't much, but I just wanted to say that from the perspective of a person that doesn't know a lot about poetry in technical terms liked this and is trying to explain why (badly) :p
Thanks for sharing.

