Fireflies
#3
I enjoyed your poem. Really liked the switch and transition from warm & fluffy, lovey dovey... (loved that it got shot!)... into shooting from the hip.
Think Heslopian covered every I saw & a couple extra.
Well done thanks for the read.
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Fireflies - by Mr. Brown - 10-11-2012, 01:42 PM
RE: Fireflies - by heslopian - 10-21-2012, 12:46 PM
RE: Fireflies - by cidermaid - 11-19-2012, 04:36 PM



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