11-19-2012, 05:54 AM
I like the 2nd verse, especially the last 2 lines. The first verse is mostly just uninteresting, ok it sets up the 2nd.What's unresolved when you've found your niche?
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.

