Apocolyptic Acrostic (language)‏

[cidermaid]

You manage to convey a sense of heartfelt anger and a common deep seated fear of death that many will be able to identify with. For me the last stanza was the weakest in that it seamed to just tail off into almost an appolgy....after all those great ranting descriptive images.
Good material choice, lots to work with. On a persoanl level not sure the tone of the actual acrostic adds anything, but that might just be me.