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An Unannounced Inspection
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11-18-2012, 08:25 AM
How's this: I read it a number of times, nothing jumped out at me as a definite flaw, and nothing pulled me in. That happens with a lot of poems I suspect (I'm sure it does with mine as well). I don't comment when I have nothing to say. Which isn't a statement of the poem being bad or good, more that I just didn't connect with it.
Best, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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An Unannounced Inspection - by penguin - 11-13-2012, 06:38 AM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by rowens - 11-17-2012, 10:14 AM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by billy - 11-18-2012, 08:03 AM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by penguin - 11-18-2012, 05:02 AM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by Todd - 11-18-2012, 08:25 AM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by billy - 11-18-2012, 12:43 PM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by penguin - 11-19-2012, 04:42 AM
RE: An Unannounced Inspection - by billy - 11-21-2012, 04:58 PM
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