11-18-2012, 01:40 AM
I've never actually critiqued any work before. I'll learn as I go I suppose. For now I will just say. I really felt this one. It strikes me as a personal piece with a lot of emotion. I really enjoy how you weren't afraid to bare all and say everything you were feeling. I could feel your frustrations, anger, sadness and even a little bit of confusion it seems you feel. Thank you for posting this.

