11-18-2012, 01:34 AM
First of all. Thank you to everyone for the feedback. Angel, yea you are pretty spot on. When I started to write this, it was personal to me. It kind of all was. I don't want to get too personal so maybe this information will help. I'm a recovering addict.
TOMH - Yes they could have been softened, I didn't really take the time I should have with this poem. I just made it straight to the point on how I was feeling.
Thanks again everyone for taking your time to read this!
TOMH - Yes they could have been softened, I didn't really take the time I should have with this poem. I just made it straight to the point on how I was feeling.
Thanks again everyone for taking your time to read this!

