11-17-2012, 05:25 PM
i love this 
specially the last last stanza that gives it a upbeat close..maybe cos i agree with it an that anger an hate can be useful tools..there the emotions that get you off the floor an back on your feet
for me the secong stanza that mentioned you wife didnt seem to fit with the rest..cant exactly put me finger on why but it reads a very personal to you where as the rest of the poem isn't ?
specially the last last stanza that gives it a upbeat close..maybe cos i agree with it an that anger an hate can be useful tools..there the emotions that get you off the floor an back on your feetfor me the secong stanza that mentioned you wife didnt seem to fit with the rest..cant exactly put me finger on why but it reads a very personal to you where as the rest of the poem isn't ?