11-17-2012, 04:58 PM
cheers guys 
i think after reading it back i agree with a lot of the crit..pfft yeah an the cliche line lol
the only thing i dont is the 'abuse' line i feel very strongly about that but how do you mean by
"this line is a bit too telling, can you think of a way to show it instead?"..not sure i understand that
i think after reading it back i agree with a lot of the crit..pfft yeah an the cliche line lolthe only thing i dont is the 'abuse' line i feel very strongly about that but how do you mean by
"this line is a bit too telling, can you think of a way to show it instead?"..not sure i understand that