Maple at its best

Maple at its best

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11-17-2012, 05:37 AM

This is a great poem too. I don't understand all of the words, and I admit it's not clear to me what each line is referring to. But I agree with what Leanne said about the alliteration, and it does have a soothing pace.

I wonder if it should say "breathes" instead of "breaths"?

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Maple at its best - by Keith - 11-15-2012, 10:00 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by Leanne - 11-17-2012, 05:18 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by Rose Love - 11-17-2012, 05:37 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by cidermaid - 11-17-2012, 06:27 PM

RE: Maple at its best - by billy - 11-17-2012, 06:37 PM

RE: Maple at its best - by Keith - 11-19-2012, 05:47 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by billy - 11-19-2012, 11:02 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by Todd - 11-19-2012, 10:25 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by Leanne - 11-19-2012, 11:02 AM

RE: Maple at its best - by Keith - 11-19-2012, 08:45 PM

RE: Maple at its best - by heslopian - 11-21-2012, 06:11 PM

RE: Maple at its best - by billy - 11-22-2012, 12:06 PM

RE: Maple at its best - by Keith - 11-23-2012, 10:05 AM

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