Maple at its best

[Leanne]

I really enjoy the spareness of your words here. The alliteration is subtle but functions in much the same way as rhyme, to tie the poem together. The idea that all of these things are being done to the man, rather than him being protagonist, is really interesting and positions him as just another part of a dynamic -- but unhurried -- landscape.

Should "large hand wrap frets" be "wraps frets" or "large hands"? And an apostrophe in "rocker's". That's all I've got to correct

I feel soothed, having read this. Thank you.