11-15-2012, 06:45 PM
IMO 'personal poetry' is the best kind, be it a life experiance or a feeling or point of view
the line "So, at seven, I had new shoes," is perfect it makes the write 'conversational' bringing it off the screen into like almost 'real time' givin it a harder edge an more depth..theres really a real person behind this
also makes a nice change for me not to be googling words i dont understand
liked this a lot
the line "So, at seven, I had new shoes," is perfect it makes the write 'conversational' bringing it off the screen into like almost 'real time' givin it a harder edge an more depth..theres really a real person behind this
also makes a nice change for me not to be googling words i dont understand
liked this a lot