Thanks Billy I changed the two thens. Which is a good example of how my proof reading used to be. Thanks for the comments. I'll consider them if I decide to revise.
Rose, Thanks for the additional discussion. I agree with Billy post it in poetry discussion. It's probably worth talking about. For me, I've found that all critique has value--even on the old ones. The topic might still be valuable, or maybe you've polished your technique to such a degree that you're no longer writing with energy. Mostly, though I think it's good to remind yourself where you came from, or that could be all bs...thanks again.
Jack, I appreciate your comments on this old thing. Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time.
Best,
Todd
Thanks TOMH, I appreciate the read and comments.
Rose, Thanks for the additional discussion. I agree with Billy post it in poetry discussion. It's probably worth talking about. For me, I've found that all critique has value--even on the old ones. The topic might still be valuable, or maybe you've polished your technique to such a degree that you're no longer writing with energy. Mostly, though I think it's good to remind yourself where you came from, or that could be all bs...thanks again.
Jack, I appreciate your comments on this old thing. Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time.
Best,
Todd
Thanks TOMH, I appreciate the read and comments.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson