I'm foreva blowing
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(11-13-2012, 10:00 AM)Luna C. Moon Wrote:  
(10-20-2012, 06:54 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  
I was born a bubble
from spittle-chased lips I slipped
blown into being on a raspberry breeze
I rose over summer gardens, weightless on giggles
meniscus glistening with twirling colours
welcomed by my mother’s arms
I aged on her palm

This is the first poem I have read on this site and what a wonderfully well constructed and refreshing read it is too.

I don't want to sound too fawny on my first day, but that was a delight.
Much appreciate Luna C and welcome to the Pen
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Messages In This Thread
I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 10-20-2012, 06:54 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by just mercedes - 10-20-2012, 07:04 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 10-20-2012, 07:08 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by addy - 10-20-2012, 10:13 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by billy - 10-20-2012, 04:27 PM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 10-26-2012, 04:21 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by billy - 10-26-2012, 06:37 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by abu nuwas - 11-13-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 11-14-2012, 12:46 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 08:35 AM



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