Laces
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But I wonder how relevant critique is on a poem that was written so long ago? We develop and change a lot, vocabulary increases, life experience changes us and our perspectives--probably we couldn't write a poem as bad as the first ones we wrote even if we tried lol. I don't think I could.

I had more to write, but too far off the topic of your poem, so I'll refrain from writing it Tongue. But definitely, thanks for the encouragement.
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Laces - by Todd - 11-14-2012, 07:58 AM
RE: Laces - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 08:09 AM
RE: Laces - by Todd - 11-14-2012, 08:14 AM
RE: Laces - by billy - 11-14-2012, 08:24 AM
RE: Laces - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 08:26 AM
RE: Laces - by billy - 11-14-2012, 08:52 AM
RE: Laces - by heslopian - 11-14-2012, 09:00 AM
RE: Laces - by Keith - 11-14-2012, 09:50 AM
RE: Laces - by Todd - 11-14-2012, 09:54 AM
RE: Laces - by TwistedAngel - 11-15-2012, 06:45 PM
RE: Laces - by Todd - 11-18-2012, 12:26 PM



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