11-14-2012, 08:26 AM
But I wonder how relevant critique is on a poem that was written so long ago? We develop and change a lot, vocabulary increases, life experience changes us and our perspectives--probably we couldn't write a poem as bad as the first ones we wrote even if we tried lol. I don't think I could.
I had more to write, but too far off the topic of your poem, so I'll refrain from writing it
. But definitely, thanks for the encouragement.
I had more to write, but too far off the topic of your poem, so I'll refrain from writing it
. But definitely, thanks for the encouragement.

