Laces
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It's encouraging to see you have the courage to post this Smile I don't even think I have the first poems I wrote anymore.

I like the happy feeling at the end of this, especially in the last line. I would tie them just for fun too. Much more than new shoes.
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Laces - by Todd - 11-14-2012, 07:58 AM
RE: Laces - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 08:09 AM
RE: Laces - by Todd - 11-14-2012, 08:14 AM
RE: Laces - by billy - 11-14-2012, 08:24 AM
RE: Laces - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 08:26 AM
RE: Laces - by billy - 11-14-2012, 08:52 AM
RE: Laces - by heslopian - 11-14-2012, 09:00 AM
RE: Laces - by Keith - 11-14-2012, 09:50 AM
RE: Laces - by Todd - 11-14-2012, 09:54 AM
RE: Laces - by TwistedAngel - 11-15-2012, 06:45 PM
RE: Laces - by Todd - 11-18-2012, 12:26 PM



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