Unsocially Networked

[billy]

a relevant poem for many, i know i can relate to it. it seems most of my free time is spent on here.
i had no nits with it apart from the last line, which seemed forced.
i do have a suggestion though
how about finishing the poem with the refrain? that way it sorts of ties the reader back into the 1st line. and gets them reading it again?

thanks for the read