11-13-2012, 07:31 AM
Love is not dismayed
I love her this much
There is no "this" much
Time has beheld that which no fallacy can display
The power of it encompasses the entirety
of worldly phenomenon
Love not allayed
flies on to higher skies,
and higher heights
and it is very nice to be "in love" these days
A love that knows no boundaries
Yes, I like this a little bit better. The imagery addition is a possibility I will keep in mind... maybe something to do with comparing the awesomeness of the sun and a golden butterfly or the infinities of boundless space with the deep blue ocean as a sort of thing relating to the infinities of love with the depths of the human psyche/subconscious?
I love her this much
There is no "this" much
Time has beheld that which no fallacy can display
The power of it encompasses the entirety
of worldly phenomenon
Love not allayed
flies on to higher skies,
and higher heights
and it is very nice to be "in love" these days
A love that knows no boundaries
Yes, I like this a little bit better. The imagery addition is a possibility I will keep in mind... maybe something to do with comparing the awesomeness of the sun and a golden butterfly or the infinities of boundless space with the deep blue ocean as a sort of thing relating to the infinities of love with the depths of the human psyche/subconscious?