Love is not dismayed

[billy]

Love is not dismayed

I love her this much. There is no "this" much would splitting this into two lines help the 2nd part stand out more, it could even be italicised?
Time has beheld that which no fallacy can display
The power of it encompasseth the entirety sounds out of step, it feels like a modern language poem, encompasses would work better.
of worldly phenomenon. Love not allayed
flies on to higher skies, and higher heights
and it is very nice to be "in love" these days i really like the simplicity of this line and flow of it
A love that knows no boundaries
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PS, my first post here, so if this is in the wrong place, please let me know.

i get nice twinges of Elizabeth Barrett Browning's, How do I love thee, though see it's not meant too (i'm an old romantic )
it reads well but i wonder if an odd image would give it more depth.

thanks for the read