11-11-2012, 07:51 PM
Hello.
Thank you all for your feedback, I will definitely take another look at the poem with your feedback in mind. Right off, though, from Leanne's feedback, I did change that one line to "on" bolts of light.
Billy--I also had a car accident in mind in that specific line and with that word, but more than that, overall an intermingling of a higher dimension with ours, one beyond our sight.
Thanks
Thank you all for your feedback, I will definitely take another look at the poem with your feedback in mind. Right off, though, from Leanne's feedback, I did change that one line to "on" bolts of light.
Billy--I also had a car accident in mind in that specific line and with that word, but more than that, overall an intermingling of a higher dimension with ours, one beyond our sight.
Thanks