Haibun & Haiku
#2
did you mean sweet?

Flowers appear on the earth;
the season of singing has come,
the cooing of doves
is heard in our land.
The fig tree forms its early fruit;
the blossoming vines spread their fragrance.
Arise, come, my darling;

i'm not sure but i think the haiku leans more toward a senryu. but i enjoyed it along with the haibun
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Haibun & Haiku - by cidermaid - 11-11-2012, 12:37 AM
RE: Haibun & Haiku - by billy - 11-11-2012, 10:20 AM
RE: Haibun & Haiku - by cidermaid - 11-11-2012, 06:19 PM
RE: Haibun & Haiku - by cidermaid - 11-11-2012, 11:34 PM
RE: Haibun & Haiku - by billy - 11-16-2012, 01:02 PM



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