first attempt at a sonnet
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The greatest love story ever…….
(An over view of Song of songs - the whole story)

Can love be captured, penned, be tamed and trained?
A Song of Songs! To whom belonged this piece?
For graced this song the sages, and much was gained.
Thus remiss them so kissed. Love lost, without peace
to roam, if ever such a kiss would be dismissed.
An alter stone, such heart would scarce be fitted,
to grace the words of love thus tamed amiss.
So dust to dust a heart is lost; uncommited.
But love his word has spoken true. He calls,
unchanged from age to age, his love, his 'dove'
to "come my beautiful one...(the curtain falls).
For you I die. My life, a gift my love".
Thus speaks the word on tablets plain. Alas delayed.
But wait, he comes! Your love is here this day.
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first attempt at a sonnet - by cidermaid - 11-11-2012, 01:18 AM
RE: first attempt at a sonnet - by Leanne - 11-11-2012, 05:26 AM
RE: first attempt at a sonnet - by cidermaid - 11-11-2012, 06:06 AM
RE: first attempt at a sonnet - by Leanne - 11-11-2012, 06:36 AM
RE: first attempt at a sonnet - by billy - 11-11-2012, 11:25 AM



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