I'm a Silver Fox
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(11-08-2012, 11:52 PM)kamirakara Wrote:  Above ground, but buried
I'm biting my nails until I bleed
Trapped in a cage of steel
Let me out, let me feel

Vanity will be the death of me
Only when I pass I will be free
Nothing but a product of consumption
Who will stand with me in objection?

Euthanize me, before I'm skinned alive
I chew my hands, I will never survive
I'm not alone, what we produce appeal
I beg you, let me out, let me feel

I'm sore, I'm aching
Amputated, bones breaking

I'm a silver fox
Ooh, I like the edit. You upped the urgency, I think. I'm afraid I didn't understand the line "I'm not alone, what we produce appeal"... something must be lost in translation.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
I'm a Silver Fox - by kamirakara - 11-08-2012, 04:23 AM
RE: I'm a Silver Fox - by billy - 11-08-2012, 08:07 AM
RE: I'm a Silver Fox - by kamirakara - 11-08-2012, 11:52 PM
RE: I'm a Silver Fox - by addy - 11-10-2012, 03:50 PM
RE: I'm a Silver Fox - by kamirakara - 11-13-2012, 06:55 AM
RE: I'm a Silver Fox - by Keith - 11-13-2012, 07:27 AM
RE: I'm a Silver Fox - by kamirakara - 12-03-2012, 03:09 AM



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