Girl in the BMW
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I like how the story opened up, and thought the ending was the most interesting part, in its ambiguity. Even at this point she's happy to let others suffer the consequences for her cavalier actions... maybe someone like her can change, maybe she won't.

Thanks for the read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Girl in the BMW - by danieleforcolor - 11-10-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Girl in the BMW - by addy - 11-10-2012, 03:11 PM
RE: Girl in the BMW - by TwistedAngel - 11-16-2012, 01:49 AM



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