sounds really good, the voice brings it alive. will comment more later 
meanwhile. you need to save and upload the file as an mp3
i took the liberty of mp3ing it, saving it on my id at kiwi and saying that you wrote it.
i can remove it if it's not okay
a couple of stutter but nicely done. on hearing the poem and seeing the text at the same time, i'd suggest you break a line where ever you pause in the poem. just a suggestion mind, i think the text is missing a bit of grammar but nothing too great. there felt like there was a lot of cherished love in the audio version. an excellent read. (a couple of stutters but an excellent read nonetheless
thanks for taking the time tomh
meanwhile. you need to save and upload the file as an mp3
i took the liberty of mp3ing it, saving it on my id at kiwi and saying that you wrote it.
i can remove it if it's not okay
a couple of stutter but nicely done. on hearing the poem and seeing the text at the same time, i'd suggest you break a line where ever you pause in the poem. just a suggestion mind, i think the text is missing a bit of grammar but nothing too great. there felt like there was a lot of cherished love in the audio version. an excellent read. (a couple of stutters but an excellent read nonetheless
thanks for taking the time tomh