under a gibbous moon
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like goblins
listening in darkness
we suck our breath and hum

with the flat thwacking
as I strike your kneecaps
and hammer your ribcage marimba
with makeshift mallets

of wooden spoons

the rasping notes
unfurling like ebony petals
in the witching hour
of a midnight garden


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like goblins
listening in darkness
we suck our breath and hum
with the flat thwacking

as I strike your kneecaps
and hammer your ribcage marimba
with makeshift mallets
of wooden spoons

the rasping notes
unfurling like ebony petals
in the witching hour
of a midnight garden
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
under a gibbous moon - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 02:28 PM
RE: under a gibbous moon - by billy - 11-06-2012, 03:31 PM
RE: under a gibbous moon - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 04:17 PM
RE: under a gibbous moon - by billy - 11-06-2012, 04:25 PM
RE: under a gibbous moon - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 04:26 PM
RE: under a gibbous moon - by Todd - 11-06-2012, 08:22 PM
RE: under a gibbous moon - by Keith - 11-07-2012, 08:47 AM



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