11-06-2012, 01:21 PM
Let me repeat the man said, “Do you want to give away what you hate? Do you want the change I can offer?”
(I think there should be quotation marks here, on "Let me repeat").
Todd, this is a really good story. If you do finish turning it into a novel, I would certainly buy it. Good luck to you in that endeavor.
(I think there should be quotation marks here, on "Let me repeat").
Todd, this is a really good story. If you do finish turning it into a novel, I would certainly buy it. Good luck to you in that endeavor.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?