11-04-2012, 10:01 AM
Wow, such a lovely couple! 
This poem is so great. I was trying to pick out a favorite stanza I could comment on, but found that I liked all of them for different reasons: S2 made me smile, and it set such a vivid scene with so few words. S3, was casually thoughtful, S4 was so affectionate. and S5, it implies scars, pains and sorrows, but never dwells on them; a subtle gesture that chases away ghosts rather than inviting them.
This poem is so great. I was trying to pick out a favorite stanza I could comment on, but found that I liked all of them for different reasons: S2 made me smile, and it set such a vivid scene with so few words. S3, was casually thoughtful, S4 was so affectionate. and S5, it implies scars, pains and sorrows, but never dwells on them; a subtle gesture that chases away ghosts rather than inviting them.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?