Diagnostic Terms (revision)

[billy]

How is this for feedback?

I let my mom read it today. I was busy doing something and had pulled the page up on my phone for her and I forgot about it because I was plumbing, but then it hit me that she never said if she liked it. So I half-started to yell (because I thought she had walked off) 'So what do ya think?' and as I looked up I saw that she had sat down on the bed holding my phone and her face was covered with tears.

my dad was the same...it was his piles, he cries everytime he sits down sorry, sorry, sorry, i couldn't help meself. do you think you're mum would join the forum (i'm expecting a ban for this )