11-03-2012, 03:05 AM
Hey, Billy. I am faltering a bit with the first line, trying to read as 'porch storm' or 'storm lamp'. Kinda clunky. Should it be a porch lamp or a storm lamp? I do get caught in a brewing wind sway, which I enjoy.
Otherwise, love the rest.
Otherwise, love the rest.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?