11-01-2012, 09:47 AM
Mark: I appreciate the feedback and comments. I'll consider what you've said as I move toward rewrite. I think your comment on back to life is right on and I'll cut that now. Thank you.
Billy: thank you for the comments I'm considering especially what you said about those bracketed parts. I may cut them...as with any first draft there's a lot on the table. Much appreciated.
Billy: thank you for the comments I'm considering especially what you said about those bracketed parts. I may cut them...as with any first draft there's a lot on the table. Much appreciated.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson