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10-26-2012, 09:44 AM
(10-26-2012, 07:06 AM)billy Wrote:  a nice short form poem dd.
that reads like a senryu.
not sure the repetition works well enough in such a short poem
to use so much of it.

Thanks for the read.
Ooopps Sorry dd it looks like I need to read billys link againBlush
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Messages In This Thread
FireFly - by ddtankerz - 10-25-2012, 04:38 AM
RE: FireFly - by Keith - 10-25-2012, 08:00 AM
RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-26-2012, 07:06 AM
RE: FireFly - by Keith - 10-26-2012, 09:44 AM
RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-26-2012, 11:27 AM
RE: FireFly - by ddtankerz - 10-26-2012, 06:34 PM
RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-27-2012, 06:07 AM
RE: FireFly - by just mercedes - 10-27-2012, 08:45 AM



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