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Ripples
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10-23-2012, 07:12 AM
Whew, thanks for the read Todd it was most enjoyable, but you know I reckon you could transform it into a Homeric type of epic, your natural bent for rhyme is there in this little excerpt, lol, ( There was a knock on his door. “Hey, you want to have a little one-on-one?” He spun the ball on one finger. “I’m not used to losing to my own son.” ) well done, cheers
Oh what a wicket web we weave!
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RE: Ripples - by TwistedAngel - 10-20-2012, 08:43 PM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-21-2012, 12:10 AM
RE: Ripples - by TwistedAngel - 10-21-2012, 04:51 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-21-2012, 04:53 AM
RE: Ripples - by TwistedAngel - 10-21-2012, 05:06 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-21-2012, 05:18 AM
RE: Ripples - by TwistedAngel - 10-21-2012, 05:27 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-21-2012, 05:34 AM
RE: Ripples - by billy - 10-21-2012, 08:56 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-21-2012, 09:52 PM
RE: Ripples - by popeye - 10-23-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-25-2012, 06:25 AM
RE: Ripples - by billy - 10-26-2012, 07:01 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 10-26-2012, 10:16 AM
RE: Ripples - by billy - 10-26-2012, 10:55 AM
RE: Ripples - by Aish - 11-04-2012, 10:58 AM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 11-04-2012, 12:19 PM
RE: Ripples - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 01:21 PM
RE: Ripples - by Todd - 11-06-2012, 08:27 PM
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