You warm up my heart

You warm up my heart

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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10-23-2012, 06:53 AM

i like the way you used illumine instead of illuminated in order to keep it at 7 sills.
nice contrast with icy and warm being used for the same thing.
good to see you posting .

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You warm up my heart - by haymanali - 10-22-2012, 11:08 PM

RE: You warm up my heart - by billy - 10-23-2012, 06:53 AM

RE: You warm up my heart - by Aish - 11-02-2012, 04:33 AM

RE: You warm up my heart - by Wildcard - 11-02-2012, 09:18 AM

RE: You warm up my heart - by addy - 11-02-2012, 03:15 PM

RE: You warm up my heart - by cidermaid - 11-11-2012, 12:47 AM

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