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Critique this maybe?
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10-21-2012, 12:49 PM
The tea analogy is effective, and I liked the refrain. I enjoy poems which don't ramble but deal with one image or idea and create something focused and unique. Thanks for the read.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Critique this maybe? - by ambustharp - 10-05-2012, 03:09 PM
RE: Critique this maybe? - by rowens - 10-06-2012, 01:26 AM
RE: Critique this maybe? - by Keith - 10-07-2012, 03:57 AM
RE: Critique this maybe? - by just mercedes - 10-07-2012, 04:19 AM
RE: Critique this maybe? - by billy - 10-07-2012, 09:39 AM
RE: Critique this maybe? - by Philatone - 10-08-2012, 12:31 AM
RE: Critique this maybe? - by heslopian - 10-21-2012, 12:49 PM
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