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I'm foreva blowing
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10-20-2012, 10:13 AM
Wow, what a great piece. Every line was just a treat to read. I agree that the way the poem floated and swelled before settling back down was a great touch
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 10-20-2012, 06:54 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by just mercedes - 10-20-2012, 07:04 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 10-20-2012, 07:08 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by addy - 10-20-2012, 10:13 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by billy - 10-20-2012, 04:27 PM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 10-26-2012, 04:21 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by billy - 10-26-2012, 06:37 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by abu nuwas - 11-13-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Keith - 11-14-2012, 12:46 AM
RE: I'm foreva blowing - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 08:35 AM
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