First Poem

First Poem

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10-19-2012, 06:14 AM

Thanks for the feedback. I've added to the beginning and made some changes. I'm going to edit my original post and include the added material.

Let me know what you think.

Thanks

Spoons.

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First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-18-2012, 09:26 AM

RE: First Poem - by billy - 10-18-2012, 09:41 AM

RE: First Poem - by addy - 10-18-2012, 09:53 AM

RE: First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-19-2012, 06:14 AM

RE: First Poem - by billy - 10-19-2012, 07:01 AM

RE: First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-19-2012, 07:21 AM

RE: First Poem - by TwistedAngel - 10-19-2012, 07:31 AM

RE: First Poem - by vrgd - 10-28-2012, 01:06 AM

RE: First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-30-2012, 03:11 AM

RE: First Poem - by just mercedes - 10-30-2012, 07:13 AM

RE: First Poem - by billy - 10-30-2012, 08:36 AM

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