These Boots

[Keith]

ermm 1 quick question..more about the critique than the write

i dont get wots wrong with the line "scream my battle cry" ???? i read it as a instruction to others anyways

love the use of local words an phrases tho..LDNers always seem to replace U with a A

I thought - why would you tell anyone else to scream your battle cry? Won't they have their own?

The line I used, was said to another person, your thoughts are correct. But I also see how it could be read another way.