These Boots

These Boots

just mercedes
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10-17-2012, 03:33 PM

(10-15-2012, 03:12 PM)TwistedAngel Wrote: ermm 1 quick question..more about the critique than the write

i dont get wots wrong with the line "scream my battle cry" ???? i read it as a instruction to others anyways

love the use of local words an phrases tho..LDNers always seem to replace U with a A

I thought - why would you tell anyone else to scream your battle cry? Won't they have their own?

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These Boots - by Keith - 10-15-2012, 08:20 AM

RE: These Boots - by billy - 10-15-2012, 08:28 AM

RE: These Boots - by just mercedes - 10-15-2012, 08:45 AM

RE: These Boots - by Keith - 10-15-2012, 10:23 AM

RE: These Boots - by just mercedes - 10-15-2012, 10:36 AM

RE: These Boots - by Keith - 10-16-2012, 05:14 AM

RE: These Boots - by TwistedAngel - 10-15-2012, 03:12 PM

RE: These Boots - by just mercedes - 10-17-2012, 03:33 PM

RE: These Boots - by Keith - 10-18-2012, 04:45 AM

RE: These Boots - by billy - 10-15-2012, 03:34 PM

RE: These Boots - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 09:05 AM

RE: These Boots - by TwistedAngel - 10-17-2012, 03:44 PM

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