These Boots

[Keith]

everyone sees things differently. because you see nothing wrong with it doesn't mean others don't. it's an opinion between the person replying and the poet.


the only stanza that works for me is the last one. (i've been in a police cell ) the first stanza goes over my head and the rest feels to theatrical.

Thanks Billy something to think about

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ermm 1 quick question..more about the critique than the write

i dont get wots wrong with the line "scream my battle cry" ???? i read it as a instruction to others anyways

love the use of local words an phrases tho..LDNers always seem to replace U with a A

Thanks for the feedback TwistedA