everyone sees things differently. because you see nothing wrong with it doesn't mean others don't. it's an opinion between the person replying and the poet.
the only stanza that works for me is the last one. (i've been in a police cell
) the first stanza goes over my head and the rest feels to theatrical.
the only stanza that works for me is the last one. (i've been in a police cell
) the first stanza goes over my head and the rest feels to theatrical.
