10-12-2012, 08:39 AM
[quote='musicalmyheart' pid='104051' dateline='1349978018']
[font=Times New Roman]Alive. Alive. Breathe...cry.
I really enjoyed this, made me think of long fights and the moments of forgivness then read it again and thought of feeling trapped and getting past problems without forgiving, I guess that compromise. Clever start and last lines, if one small comment, then "Your eyes. Blind. But now you see" sounds a bit cliche
Thanks for the share
[font=Times New Roman]Alive. Alive. Breathe...cry.
I really enjoyed this, made me think of long fights and the moments of forgivness then read it again and thought of feeling trapped and getting past problems without forgiving, I guess that compromise. Clever start and last lines, if one small comment, then "Your eyes. Blind. But now you see" sounds a bit cliche
Thanks for the share