10-10-2012, 09:57 PM
I think if between each certain amount of longer lines, you had a steady couple of rhyming lines like these
"Why? Why was he born into pain?
How? How can he escape the everlasting rain?",
and limit the end line rhymes in the longer lines, it could steady the pace, and add a certain hypnotic rhythm. But you might be making a point to give a more free-flowing rhythm?
"Why? Why was he born into pain?
How? How can he escape the everlasting rain?",
and limit the end line rhymes in the longer lines, it could steady the pace, and add a certain hypnotic rhythm. But you might be making a point to give a more free-flowing rhythm?