10-09-2012, 10:22 PM
I kept reading it thinking
"A small edit, thanks to Leanne and Aish.
I've always been abashed;
embarrassment never crept near.
No, it pounced like the fresh woke bear..."
was all part of the poem.
Now I have to rethink it.
"A small edit, thanks to Leanne and Aish.
I've always been abashed;
embarrassment never crept near.
No, it pounced like the fresh woke bear..."
was all part of the poem.
Now I have to rethink it.
