10-09-2012, 05:57 PM
hi mr brown.
i'll leave some feedback on your poetry. at present your batting 4 for 0 so please leave some feedback and be fair
hi Tally, like wise people get to your poems as well
you wrote;
I am not a very good source of critique but I can say I loved the combination of words you used in both your poems. They resulted in a powerful impact despite how short they both are. it okay, like anything, feedback improves with practice. all we ask is that poets contribute; thanks you
hi Antares,
thanks for the poem, don't forget to leave feedback elsewhere
welcome to the site (all three of you
)
i'll leave some feedback on your poetry. at present your batting 4 for 0 so please leave some feedback and be fair

hi Tally, like wise people get to your poems as well

you wrote;
I am not a very good source of critique but I can say I loved the combination of words you used in both your poems. They resulted in a powerful impact despite how short they both are. it okay, like anything, feedback improves with practice. all we ask is that poets contribute; thanks you

hi Antares,
thanks for the poem, don't forget to leave feedback elsewhere

welcome to the site (all three of you
