Petroleum men
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Petroleum-weavers;
Petroleum-feeders.
Oxygen-sleepers;
Petroleum-keepers.

Petroleum plastic;
Petroleum-sound-speakers.
Petroleum-kitchens;
Petroleum-food-cleavers.

In this petroleum-running
Heart, you will find
The love and adoration of
Fellow petroleum-man.

Petroleum-eaters;
Petroleum-bleeders.
Oxygen-thinkers;
Petroleum-breathers.

In this petroleum-running
Nation, you will find
The silent dependence of
The petroleum-lifestyle.

Petroleum bird-guts;
Petroleum-waters.
Petroleum-ice-caps;
Petroleum-whalers.

Petroleum-poor? -
Petroleum-speakers.
Petroleum-war;
Petroleum-weepers.


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all comments & criticism welcome

I think I'm communicating very well here. I tried to be very clear. Please tell me what you are gleaning from the particular use of grammar; the meanings you take away- particularly lines like "Petroleum-bleeders".

thanks
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Messages In This Thread
Petroleum men - by Chaotic Body - 10-09-2012, 08:09 AM
RE: Petroleum men - by billy - 10-09-2012, 08:38 AM
RE: Petroleum men - by addy - 10-09-2012, 09:29 AM
RE: Petroleum men - by Lightbaron - 10-09-2012, 11:40 AM
RE: Petroleum men - by Alden - 10-18-2012, 03:32 AM



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