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10-09-2012, 06:22 AM
philatone and addy- thank you for the read and comments. the particular-is a particular sick from drug use...definitely is a minimizing of the far from from sober line. a few of the concerns voiced are being weighed, and again i thank you for them. the last stanza is rubbing me a bit wrong at the moment an may take your advice (addy) on squashing that last line
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one trick - by Lightbaron - 09-30-2012, 01:23 PM
RE: one trick - by billy - 09-30-2012, 02:13 PM
RE: one trick - by Lightbaron - 10-02-2012, 05:25 AM
RE: one trick - by Philatone - 10-02-2012, 11:04 AM
RE: one trick - by addy - 10-02-2012, 11:34 AM
RE: one trick - by Lightbaron - 10-09-2012, 06:22 AM
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