10-08-2012, 12:36 AM
hello time!
my biggest thought was to add a period after "knocked" and add capital letters as needed ("little steps", I'm looking at you).
in some ways, I feel like the poem could be lengthened, though perhaps by adding more to the beginning than the end.
regardless, a fun, fitting read
my biggest thought was to add a period after "knocked" and add capital letters as needed ("little steps", I'm looking at you).
in some ways, I feel like the poem could be lengthened, though perhaps by adding more to the beginning than the end.
regardless, a fun, fitting read
Written only for you to consider.