Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out
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Hi MrA,
Where do I start? Huh

Wow, what a great thing for any poet to have written. I am no expert by any means, but just on a personal level I felt so much from reading this just a couple of times. I lurk a lot, but I had to at least let you know that I am into this and will look for more of your work.

There is one line that I think may be extranneous:

Quote:We get attached to people because
they are everywhere
and
we like having us around.

jmo

Thanks for sharing. Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 12:40 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by rowens - 10-06-2012, 03:09 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 07:45 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 07:43 PM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by Wildcard - 10-06-2012, 08:59 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-10-2012, 02:43 PM



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