10-06-2012, 08:52 AM
A class poem, and what Billy says I see now, but didn't on my first reading, the suggested edits would work I think, and I got more involved each time I read it.
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Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out
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Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 12:40 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by rowens - 10-06-2012, 03:09 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 07:45 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by Aish - 10-06-2012, 04:11 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by billy - 10-06-2012, 08:46 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 07:43 PM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by Keith - 10-06-2012, 08:52 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by Wildcard - 10-06-2012, 08:59 AM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by Leanne - 10-07-2012, 03:29 PM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by MrA - 10-10-2012, 02:43 PM
RE: Before the Last Volcano Spits Us Out - by Chaotic Body - 10-14-2012, 03:38 PM
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